Poor Imp

Now I've read a few things of yours, Eccentric, and, of course, always 'tis a pleasure. You've an even understanding and familiarity with the forms that I think keeps things ...

If I wore a dress, right? Hell. ...been drinking or just blind? -Tov -- Have ever had a piece of clothing you hated to have worn out, lost, or grown-out ...

- Writing some thousand words or more is easy in an hour - Hours are hard to come by, quiet or not, at a computer - Plot anamolies don't matter ...

It's a well-described brief interlude there. But emotionally forward without angst? That's always the trick, isn't it. ^_^ Try describing things more thoroughly--without a recurring reference to "I".

Too far, right?... Hell--you think I was counting? Sure, fifty feet...fifty-one. --idiots just didn't stop. 'Til they hit a wall. Vostok to Zapad, 'rade. -Tov Kilometer through alleys, or more. ...

Sure. All the time. No reason. ...Ha--serious? That means no. Hell--think I'm a bloody what? Drev, right? -Tov Only Tov, all right. Bloody unreasonable--but that's what it is, he is. ...

Oy, Imp was dead on that promise without the extension... -_-'' Now I'm sure I can make it--mostly. I've done two, I think.

Not precisely fiction then, is it? ^_~ Moved .

Heehee... Only 12K? Imp... for shame! :P I feel bad, really. ^_~ Blame it on fencing...oy, I beat my brains out with a foil and still didn't make first.

What's rather neat about it all is the catch-phrase like simplicity the lines manage. ^_^ I can see them intermingled with film in some movie trailer. Sighing, Weeping, Longing, A ...

Merci, both of you. Imp, This is my novella, so there will be much more, so you might get a batter feel of the story once I post more. In ...

I stick to said, whispered, shouted and maybe one or another now and then. But I try hard to use no tags at all, the action, and what they say, ...

BFG has a good point. ^_^ Moved .

Hey--stupid, right? Gamble? All luck. Ha. I might have good luck. -Tov No, bloody bad habit, I think. -Piers -- Do you tend to trust people with your name?

Incan-- Thanks very much for the perspective. Honestly, the tweaking is appreciated, and the time. Snoink-- I always get the flip-side with you, Snoink. ^_^ Which is good for looking ...